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Warning: May be a bit disturbing but not enough to warrant a 'real' warning

"Woah (Name)! When did you get a secret admirer?!" Your friend, (Friend's Name) yelled.
You were leaving school and she was racing towards you, a heart shaped package in her hands. Strangley enough, you started to thing about EJ ( you decided to nickname your little night visitor). It had been a week since he appeared in your room and he was all you could think about.

"Yo! (Name)! You listening?" Your friend asked while waving her hands infront of your face. She sure was an eneretic one. You always wondered how you kept up with your nut job of a friend.

"Sorry (FN). What did you say?"  You asked tilting your head towards her. She gave you a devious smirk and thrusted the box into your chest.

"Seems like someone's been getting fah-reee-kay without telling her bestfriend." She pouted.

"Why havn't you told me about yo boo thang."

You scoffed. "Okay there are so many things wrong with EVERYTHING you just stated. 1. Im not getting 'fah-ree-kay' with anyone. 2. Even if I was, it's not like I'm gonna give you all the details and 3. I didn't even know someone was giving me gifts so therefore you have no reason to pout AND no reason to say I have a boo thang."
Your friend frowned but quickly shook it off and her eyes landed on the box in your hands.

"Well don't leave me in suspense girl! Open it! Open It! OPEN IT!

"No way! I'm opening it when I get home."

(FN)'s face dropped and she puffed out her cheeks , greatly resembeling a chipmunk.

'But why! You wouldn't even know about that present if it wasn't for me. If I hadn't stopped by your locker to steal your candy , that gift would've been there until Monday morning!"

"What was that about stealing my candy?"

"That's besides the point (Nickname). Since i brought you that gift I'm obligated to know what's in it!"

You rolled your eyes and continued to walk home, (FN) trailing behind, trying to think of ways to get you to open the present. When you finally reached your front door, (FN) was still going on about how she 'Saved your love life by getting and bringing the present to you'.

"Okay (FN) I'll open it and let you know what's in it IF and only IF you go home first."

She squealed and smushed you into a hug , twirled around , and dashed to her home which was about 3 blocks away. Which ment you had to hurry in and open the gift if you wanted to see what it was alone. In all honesty you were ecstatic to see what was in it. It's not everyday a girl get's a 'secretc admirer , but why couldn't you shake the filling that something bad was going to happen.
You shrugged and entered your house. You said hi to your parents who both resided in the living room. They had both been keeping an eye on you ever since the Eyeless Jack event. They obviously didn't believe you saying that you should stop watching scary movies so late at night. You were quick to correct them saying it was 'Creepypasta' not some scary movie. That didn't help your case one bit.

Once you reached your room , you set your stuff down and sat dow on your bed. You took a deep breathe and looked down at the box. It was a typical heart shaped box. Red with a pink ribbon tyed on it. After staring at it you ooked out your window into the woods. They always creeped you out and ever since you started reading creepypasta you stopped lookig and going into the woods, afraid 'SlenderMan' and his proxys would snatch you up , but know something was telling you someone else lurked those woods now.

You shook your head and looked back down and started to pull at the string. Once the string was out of the way you pulled the box top off and what was inside almost made you puke.

It was a human heart.

You threw the box and heart across the room and rushed to the other end of you bed.

Trying to hold down the bile rising in your throat you looked toward the window and out towards the woods.

Standing there was none other than Eyeles Jack and once he noticed that you saw him he started to walk towards your house.

Alright me buckos here's chap 2. Thanks for the encouraging comments last chapter. Anyway I do believe this will be four parts (fourth part being the lemon) and each one will have a different title (obviously)
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glaceoniscool Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwwwwww, I wanted a kidney T_T
Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Misty: * looks down blue yes huge * That was kinda odd....
PastaLover01 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
... My best friend Kylie would totally say something like that! You discribed her perfectly! 😆
H-O-O-D-I-E Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Student Artist
"Shake the filling that something bad was about to happen" XD
OpearlTheBlackCat Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
A human heart isant bad i need shipments to be made and ALOT of jars to be filled -_-
Lucariogirl0102 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014
Esprion-girl Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
On the contrairy,my friends and I would be like this:
*Me and my friends walk into the woods*
And is this sounds like something out of 'Your Secret Admirer".:/
Whatever,still amazing.X3
Ilikecheesecake-1234 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014
*looks at le box* jaaaack why da hellz u be feeding me my species???
neigma Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Student General Artist
BRabbit313 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
My fwiend was a boy so i fixed it in my mind ... Lol... And a human heart O-O.... AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!......... I always wanted to know what a human heart feels like... l....
Eyeless-Zion Featured By Owner Edited Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
clever...very clever. It's cute yet kinda grossSign Emoji-03 (Thumbs up)
SympathyfortheDevil9 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow...the way you described reader-chan's friend is EXACTLY IDENTICAL to the way my one friend acts! She's very flighty and kinda dramatic (and I don't mean causing drama). And EXTREMELY energetic and hyper. Sometimes it's a bit much, because she can be very clingy, but I still love her!
Noom191 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Human heart hmmmm.... delishios. *eats heart*
KatDemonic18 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Writer
This totally reminds me of a story in youtube that Mr.Creepypasta read, I can't remember what's the name but it had a human heart, it's kinda like a creepy Valentine's storie :/
Btw good story ^-^ but creepy O_O
cardboardbeast Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist
I think it was called secret admirer
Esprion-girl Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Close,but its 'Your Secret Admirer'.
cardboardbeast Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Hobbyist
Shoot..oh well! :)
Esprion-girl Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's okay,it was a tiny error anyways.:P
elfmoon3 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:barf: gross gross gross gross GROSS
WolfsRainKibaXBlai Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist
HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!! A HUMAN HEART!!!!!!!!!!
Agent-LaDue Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ace-42 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Student General Artist
very well done i expcted a kidney but yeah im gonna keep reading this series thanks
WeaselStitches Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*looks at heart* For me...? HOW SWEET *tackleglomps him* :icondragonglomp:
Skye-42 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student General Artist
I'd thought I would've gotten a kidney... :iconderpyshrugplz: Either way, it's still desturbing.
linkdemon Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Me: WHY DA FUCK!!??!?! *looks out window and pouts agitatedly* really jack.... really?

KitsuneWerdio Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Noom191 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
He thinks there romantic. So he gives them to people he likes.
StealthElf Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You can say that I "HEART" him? :KnowWhatIMean?: 
Noom191 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah LOL
StealthElf Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my god...
Somebody gets one of my jokes! Somebody noticed me! HEY SENPAI SOMEBODY NOTICED ME!
Senpai: *doesnt notice me*
Midnightwaterlilly Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
I love it
2fly4dahaters Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
RUN BITCH RUN!!! Lol . I really love your story and how real it sounds aong with details. Keep up the awesome work!
mutantcat4774 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
The readers bestfriend remids me of my best friend in real life and I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! :iconkermityayplz:
corvin124 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i thought it would be a kidney xD
neverlostneverfound Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist
MY REACTION TO LE GIFT: Is this candy?.... *pokes* its squishy... Jack and Dirt emote  *puts in a jar* 
Nerezza-Lilith Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*le me opens the box**sees the human heart* *stares with a confused look* Da fuk is this shiz? *le lightbulb turns on above le head* Op Eyeless Jack was here.
Horus-the-gryphon Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
OOOOMFG!!! That was so adorable!!! I luv it! Totally made my day! ^J^
Wanna-Be-A-Pasta Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Epichalogirl Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Artist
Lol thts EXACTLY how le friend would act!
Artgrrl23 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Iamthehero2013 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Student General Artist
I laughed so much because my best friend would never say "Fah-ree-kay" She is such a goody twoshoes
AxelXenaMoon Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Professional General Artist
I'm weird. I would have done this:
Le me opening the box. Looks inside and sees the heart.
Me: O.O
Le me picks up heart. Licks it, sniffs it, pokes it, prods it, plays basketball with it, etc.
Me: BEST FUCKING GIFT EVER. :iconmegustaplz:
LoveStakler Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
what does etc mean?
AxelXenaMoon Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Professional General Artist
Etc. is short for 'Et cetera'. It means [in a sentence] 'so on'.
Example: Items in a kitchen; knife, spoon, fork, butter, milk, etc.
LoveStakler Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
thx and awesome profile pic
AxelXenaMoon Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Professional General Artist
You're welcome and thank you!
bloodyhorrorlove Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
meee to i would be like thank you ej
DarkestDreams1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist
Hell yeah
NightmareViolinist Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
The thing is I would probably just play with it or some random shit
Me: *pokes and does random shot with it*. .... Sweet -w-
NightmareViolinist Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
Gag me but you know what it was sweet even if it was a human heart :)
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