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You know how people say when you look into someone's eyes you can see right to their souls? But... What happens when that person dosn't appear to have eyes. Can you still see into their souls? You were asking yourself this as you stared into the dark abyss that should be 'Eyeless Jack's' eyes.

You also started to wonder how you got yourself inot that mess. Really you were just sitting on your bed, fiddiling around on your laptop when all of a sudden HE was there.

You two were currently having a stare down or you were doing the staring. Don't you need eyes to strare or could you stare without eyes? Questions that you obviously weren't going to ask the man... monster. Shit arn't you a curious one.
So busy in your question-filled mind, you didn't notice that he slinked towards you, only inches away.

However you did notice when he started to reach towards your head.When he was close enough to touch a hair you flinched and squezzed your eyes shut, waiting for your untimley demise.

What shocked you was that he didn't yank your hair from your scalp, but he gently took a strand and brought it up to his mask. With his other hand he lifted his mask high enough to reach his nose and brought the strand of your hair up towards his nose to sniff it.

He must have liked it because a deep almost inaudiable purr rumbled from his throat and he grabbed more aand started to rub it against his cheek.

You stood there frozen not knowing what to do, but when he dropped your hair and reached for your hands you couldn't take it.

You let out an earpiercing scream out of pure tension and terror. You heard you parent's door slam open and you watched as 'Eyeless Jack' slipped his mask back over his face.
Before your parnets could rush into your room to ask what was wrong. Jack pressed his masked mouth to your cheek and slithered out the window.
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Edit: I will continue. It'll have 4 parts ;D. If you wanna request another creep pasta character I'll be happy to do them.
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MarbleHornetsLover55 Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, my conditioner and shampoo do smell pretty sweet.

 . . . *hides shampoo and conditioner bottle under pillow* If anyone asks, we ran out.
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H-O-O-D-I-E Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Student Artist
Wow. I guess Jack likes the smell of doughnut shampoo... >_>
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Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Student Writer
lol
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:iconmonikathedoll:
Welp, Jack, my lovely eyeless darling since you love the smell of my ratted ass hair, then *cuts my long hair short* You, can, um, keep it. 
dont do anything weird while smelling it. *Stares at hand*


also never knew you like the smell of Ocean Breeze
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OpearlTheBlackCat Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
The slivered out the window' is jack a snake
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SeeUtheVocaloid Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Student General Artist
I wonder how close he would be if the reader had shorter hair, like above the shoulder. XD
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ThePokemonz Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Freddy: He would probably like get behind her and like sniff it or something ....
Me: Good idea! *highfives Freddy*
Bonnie: Idiots...... *facepalm*
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neigma Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Student General Artist
finally, a sane reaction from Reader-chan XD
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XSilverSiren Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
Ikr! All the ones I've read are like: 

He killed her family. He thinks she's cute. She thinks he's cute. Now she doesn't care that he killed her family.
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NekoMinecrafter Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Once I read one where Jeff killed Reader-chans best friend and he was just like "I think we should hang out sometime!" and she just rolled her eyes and was like "okay"
and I was like :iconfacepalmplz:
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XSilverSiren Featured By Owner May 19, 2015
Yup
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neigma Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Student General Artist
yerp
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XSilverSiren Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014
Sometimes I'm like, 'Well, I know I wouldn't trust a random dude who just killed my family. It's nice to know that most people would. ' 
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neigma Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Student General Artist
why would you trust a random murderer?
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XSilverSiren Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
ikr
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KatelScout47 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Assuming Jack took strands of hair that were nearer to him since he was facing my face, (lol) he'd actually be touching my face because my hair is really really short at the front. XD
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frog6 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Artist
ERMAHGERD THIS IS AMAZING!
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xXShadowmayXx Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I guess Jack really likes the smell of roses.

*whispers*I guess my mother is never getting this back...*hides shampoo under the pillow*
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iLOVEthisRAINBOWS Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
XD lol
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xXShadowmayXx Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you! *bows*
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elfmoon3 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
-poff- :blush: did he just done did what ah think he did?
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Christianthecat Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Student Artist
Jack.... Jack... JAAACK! Ur pullin on mah hair, and da hec man?! Do you always go into girls houses and sniff their hair?! O_O
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GabrielOfPalamecia Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
He likes the scent of Japenese Cherry Blossoms?

Grandma ain't getting this back.
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BloodMistressKill Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Student Filmographer
I love this. I laughed so fricken hard... X3
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AskBlacky Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
U made my day
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wolf-gal-sniper Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student Artist
Can you do masky?
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Amar8910 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My hair goes to my neck, so he would be a little too close for comfort....






I wouldn't mind it though... =w=
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NekoMinecrafter Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Mine is long, but he would still be pretty close, since the hair in front is only like four inches. 
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shadamylover7797 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dawwww this so ADORABLE!
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AnimegirlLOVER415 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
He likes the smell of strong grape shampo that i take from mu sisters i know it smells good but really also i have guy short (im a girl) so he must of been really close dafaug?
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Symmetry-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So Jack likes the smell of 'Ghostluy Grape' Scooby Doo conditioner? ( yeeeeah, gotta buy new conditioner. Ran out and have to use younger siblings' )
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AnimegirlLOVER415 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
I WANT YOUR CONDITIONER
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Symmetry-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*throws* HERE, TAKE IT! I JUST WANT MY LAUNDRY SCENTED CONDITIONER BACK!
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AnimegirlLOVER415 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
Lol yeah
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Skye-42 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student General Artist
JACK. JACK YR TOO CLOSE FOR MY LIKING. JACK. STAHP. 

(my hair is shorter at the front and long at the back. Assusming he would take strands of my hair that are close-ish to my face, he would be pretty close.)
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linkdemon Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
..... I would win the stairing contest and when he took off his mask I would have put it on an kept it. 
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MiraakTheDragonborn Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student General Artist
He must have liked it because a deep almost inaudiable purr rumbled from his throat and he grabbed more and started to rub it against his cheek.

...Okay,I know my tea-scented conditioner smells good...but really,Jack?REALLY?!
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madhatr101 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Love it
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Living-Voodoo Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thisssssssssss storyyyyyyyyyy :iconspazplz: That icon holy hell XD


Great story o3o
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Stooch-Betch Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dafauq? Jack really? Jeez he would be kinda far away from me cuz my hair is long, down to my butt.
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pdub2000 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student Artist
XD same here
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Stooch-Betch Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like your signature with the JB part. I'll do the same, sit in the Ouran Host Club drinking tea and laughing maniacally.
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pdub2000 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student Artist
I would -_- I really hate the one that shall not be named
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SeeUtheVocaloid Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Funny thing, he would be sooo close to my face cause my curls barely reach past my shoulders. XD this us a great story though.
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1Seven-Sins1 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Same here.
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ChibiNixieOxO Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Aww Jack the cutie <3 ≥^•^≤
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AjAdams2016 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
jack u adorable baby!
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Saviour-Of-The-Fate Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Have u done Jeff yet? If u haven't could u? I likez this story and id love to see a jeff one ^^
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xcosmetic Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I want to but I'm a little confused on his personality D':
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Saviour-Of-The-Fate Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok well when u make one plzzzzzzz tell me! i really likez this one! :iconpervyjeffthekilerplz:
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