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"Roma~ Please I need your help, mi amigo!" Spain pleaded to the auburn haired hot head. Romano groaned and continued to read his paper. The Spainard had suddenly rushed into the Italy Brother's home, yelling and asking about how he should propose to you.

Romano took a deep breath and let it out slowly. He turned to Spain, a vain visible on his temple.

"Listen , Antonio. (Name) is your woman, not mine , so solve your own damn problem." Romano hissed at Spain. Spain whimpered and dropped his head in disappoinment. Romano was right , but there was no way he was just going to propose to you without it being original. You were special to him. You hmde his heart race like nobody's business and it hurt to be away from you. Hell it hurt to be away from you now.

"Hey fratello! Don't be so mean to big brother Spain!" Italy shouted while running down the steps.

Romano scoffed. " You can't tell me what to do , idiota. And wern't you taking a siesta! Mind your own damn business!"

Italy pouted , but shook it off quickly , used to his brother's foul mood. He rushed over to Spain and smacked him on the back.

"Don't worry Antonio! I Helped Francis with his proposel, I can help you get your ragazza!~"

Spain brightened up and turned a listening ear to the friendly Itallian.

~Time Skip~

You were in a very jolly mood. Spain had just invited you to his home for guitar lessons that you've been begging him to give you and you were shaking with exciment.

Once you reached his home you didn't  even knock, you used the spare key that he'd given you when you stared dating , and barged in.

"Toni! I'm here! We can start now!" you yelled while looking for your green eyed boyfriend. You two have been dating for years and knew each other longer than that. You were hopelessly in love with the Spainard. You've been wantig to start a family with him , but didn't know how to approch the matter.

Spain suddenly pulled you into a hug from behind. Smushing you against his chest.

"Hola mi chava~  I've been waiting for you." He smiled down at you , green eyes sparkling. You tilted your head up and a goofy grin spread across your face.

"Hey Toni. I'm ready for action!" You turned around in his arms and clapsed your hands together, still smiling like a madman.

Spain chuckled and pulled you toward the living room. Your eyes landed on an impressive looking Spanish guitar , but you noticed that there was only one guitar there. You tilted your head in confusion,

"Toni? Why is there only one guitar , don't you need two to do  a lesson."

Spain smiled and continued to lead you to the couach were the guitar was propped up. He sat down and pulled you onto his lap. He grabbed the guitar and placed it on your lap.

"I only have one guitar because I wanted to be close to you , ángel~"

You blushed and nodded , a litte grin on your face. This was one of the reasos why you love Antonio. He never missed an oppurtunity to hold you.

"Alright , chica. This is the g- chord." Spain said while moving your fingers to the g -chord. You strummed it but it came out sounding weird. Whenever Spain strummed it , it came out sounding heavenly , but know it sounded off.

You tilted your head up to give your lover a questioning looked , but he just grinned and continued to show you each chord , each sounding worst than the last.

You sighed. "Toni, I don't want to sound rude , but I think your guitar is broken."

Spain chuckled. "Well usually when a guitar sounds this bad there's something in the soundhole. Can you check for me , mi chava?"

You nodded and stuffed your hand into the 'soundhole' searching for th object that was causing the disturbance. Your fingers brushed against a circular object and you snatched it up and nearly yanked it out.

You gasped once you caught sight of the object. It was a beautiful wedding ring. You turned around in Spain's lap , now straddiling him. He flushed at the compromised position but smiled down warmly at you.

"T-Toni wha-" you were cut off by Spain softly placing his lips on yours. He pulled away and looked deep into your eyes.

"(Name) , I've known you for most of my life and I love you with everything I have." He placed your hands on his chest, his heart beating irratically.

"This is what my heart does when I'm with you. I want it to beat like this all day every day."
He kissed your nose , your cheeks  and your forehead.

"Mi chava , ángel ,(Name). Marry me~."

You were absoulutly speechless. Was your mind playing tricks on you or was this real. You reached up and gently placed your hand on Spain's cheeck. He leaned in to your touch. Yep. It was real.

You squealed in joy and wrapped your arms around his neck.

"Yes Toni! Yes!"

-Extended Ending-

The Italy Brother's  watched the scene through Spain's window. Italy was grinning from ear to ear while Romano even had a small smile on hi face.

"See fratello~ I told you it would work!" Italy whispered to Romano. Romano scoffed and thought for a moment. He started to slowly go red.

"I-Idota .... I need your help too." Romano grumbled , his face a tomato red.

Italy's grin couldn't have gotten more wider.
When you saw the title did you already know where it was gonna be ^w^? Anyway It's kinda obvious Romano is next >w>
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animefanxlove Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
I really liked the story
But! There is one tiny little problem.
.....did you know that they were types of spanish?
Like in English the American, English, Australian type (and I can imagine many other types ) in spanish we have the Mexican, Peruvian, Colombian, Ecuadorian and literally, many, many others and the type of spanish your using is the Mexican type not the Spanish, which, yes, yes it does matter. Mexicans speak a bit sing-song alike while Spaniards have an accent with the "s" I belief.
All in all it matters the type of writing you use for Spain's dialog.
It actually makes Spain, Spain.
( of course this matters if you speak spanish, if you don't then I doesn't really affect the text, it just gives a nice touch to use the correct type of spanish.)
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Ray711 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Italy..... WHEN DID YOU GET GOOD AT LOVE WHISPERING!?!?
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absoluteanimeaddict Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  New member Student Writer
OMG HAHAHA
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InuAshi86 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ITALY IS THE LOVE WHISPERER

That was perfect

LOVE WHISPERER ITALY FOR THE WIN!!!
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AnzhelikaBraginski Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
EVERYBODY CROWD ITALY'S HOUSE FOR LOVE ADVICE.
Please he will help you get through it!
JUST DONT QUESTION SEX WITH HIM, BECAUSE HES CLUELESS WITH SEX.
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InuAshi86 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG
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AnzhelikaBraginski Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ASK THE GERMANS!!
(NOT THE FRENCH.
THEY GO OVERBOARD.)
OR RUSSIANS....
(NO >^<)
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InuAshi86 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm kinda curious about the Russian advice...?
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AnzhelikaBraginski Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Let's ask
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InuAshi86 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay... XD
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